This is a super interesting topic! I really appreciate your argument about lack of consent and the dangers that arise when the government has citizens' DNA. I remember being on a birthright Israel trip and my trip leader telling us not to use genealogy websites incase something like the Holocaust ever happened again so that the government doesn't have immediate records of our genetic Judaism. I think that you covered the microethical issues that this tech presents extremely well and I really appreciate your comparison to the OK Cupid case that we talked about- I think that worked really well and was helpful to the reader. I also really liked your use of pictures and graphs! That made it much easier to read. I think that you could jump more into the macroethical issues that this has on society and who you think is responsible for limiting the use or availability of this DNA information.